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![]() ![]() | Nightmares. My legs are moving faster than ever before. They pull me faster and closer to that rustic looking door. Should I open it? What will be inside? Is it safety or an unspeakable horror on the other side. The nob turns slowly but my hand has not yet grasped it. I back away slowly and the edge of the door seems to be following. The doorway is darkened in a fog-like shadow and my knees start to shake. It's coming for me this I know and it wants me for my soul is what it shall take. The walls begin to grow dark and my palms start to sweat. It's been following me but my heart and soul it will not get. It's an empty feeling filled with pain and grief. It will steal my heart because it is a love thief. It's a thing called lovelessness and it seeks to keep you alone and heartless and your heartbeats it shall postpone. (brain fart comin' on) I'll think of some stuff during work. And finish it then
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![]() | Re: Nightmares. Even if you do not finish it this is a hell of a poem. It is kind of interesting, you come up with the most bi-pola stuff. It is either these deeply passionate love poems or horror, and here they are combined in that you mention the doorway could have either behind it. I enjoy reading stuff like this then reading I love you, or sensual love. The symmetry. Last edited by beast; Jul 29, 2009 at 08:49 AM. |
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