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Peach_follows (Oct 30, 2008)
"Home"
The memories are slowly forgotten
As the destruction of a soul is found
Bound and tattered she lays there
Tears of an unknown pain still shinning in her eyes
She sees his shadow on the ground
And slowly she looks up to find
One of the men who has brought her
So much pain and misery staring back at her
Slowly she stands, wanting to fight him off
But the second she’s up, she’s pinned against him
His mouth crushing hers
While hands roam where they please
She braces herself for yet another brutal attack
Knowing what is to come of her
She searches for some sort of protection
As he throws her carelessly to the floor
Crying out in pain as he forces himself on her
The pain and memories come back all to quickly
And unable to keep herself from falling apart
She waits for him to become satisfied
It seems to last forever but eventually it’s over
He kicks her when she doesn’t move
Before grabbing and pulling her up by her hair
And giving her up to her other brother
When it’s all said and done
She curls up in a corner, feeling so alone
Wishing there was someone to protect her
And save her from this place she calls “Home”
Last edited by BrokenLover101; Nov 06, 2008 at 04:29 AM. Reason: "she was supposed to be he"
X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X
X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X
Peach_follows (Oct 30, 2008)
wow, that's really good, you should really make more, and keep up the good work.
Oh my, this poem is seriously intense. Im affraid to ask what inspired it....
Man.... I feel so tense and uncomfortable now. Poems rarely EVER bring out these types of emotion in me. I can usually distance myself enough from it, and remember the art and expression. But this felt so real... it made it hard for me to do that.
... Not Ever Again...
Nicely written and Intense. It makes one feel sad and want to help her, and take a gun to the men.I really enjoyed this poem.
I hope that you don't go through that sort of thing or if you did I hope you never do again. Things ilike that are horrible but it happens everywhere all the time. It's disgusting... Just because they are stronger and want something they think they can do as they please.
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
@ Peach_follows: Personal Experience is what inspired it... and I'm sorry that it caused you to be that way.. but I feel as though if it can reach a person to that level then it was worth writing. Personal Experiences create some of the best poems.. in my opinion.
@ Darkened_Star: I hope no one has to go through what I've been through.. It's something that I wouldn't even wish on my worst enemy but you know, these things happen to men as well.
X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X
X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X
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