I really liked how you the beginning started all sweet and ended being all sad........
The words have a nice rhythm
Nicely done!!!
The Love
From his heart to mine
Our laughter was divine
Hands held together
Two hearts intertwined as one
One heart, two souls interwined
The ending
His love being true
Her love was being suppressed
All at once it seemed
That fighting was all they did
She ran from her life, her love
The aftermath
She sits in her chair
Wishing she had only showed
The love in her heart
That she always kept suppressed
In the dead of night, she cries
First time I've ever done one of these but I think it's alright.. ^-^ Enjoy~!
X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X
X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X
I really liked how you the beginning started all sweet and ended being all sad........
The words have a nice rhythm
Nicely done!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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