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    Otaku BrokenLover101 is off to a good start BrokenLover101's Avatar
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    Our Relationship

    The Love

    From his heart to mine
    Our laughter was divine
    Hands held together
    Two hearts intertwined as one
    One heart, two souls interwined

    The ending

    His love being true
    Her love was being suppressed
    All at once it seemed
    That fighting was all they did
    She ran from her life, her love

    The aftermath


    She sits in her chair
    Wishing she had only showed
    The love in her heart
    That she always kept suppressed
    In the dead of night, she cries


    First time I've ever done one of these but I think it's alright.. ^-^ Enjoy~!
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Chtonian Slayer Astaroth may be famous one day Astaroth's Avatar
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    Re: Our Relationship

    I really liked how you the beginning started all sweet and ended being all sad........
    The words have a nice rhythm
    Nicely done!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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