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    Overcast Winter: December Entry

    This month, though i know it has almost no chance to win, I will write a haiku:

    Snow dances down from
    The gray clouded heavens which
    Envelope our world
    Why hello there!

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    Re: Overcast Winter: December Entry

    Nice beginning, dude. Please, follow with it!

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    Re: Overcast Winter: December Entry

    It is difficult to win with eastern poetry, especially haiku, kudo to you for trying though. I used a sedoka which is a variation of waka the same style haiku is derived from. It is difficult. I wrote a haiku about winter in the poetry section a while back. That style does not lend itself to the english language easily.

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    Re: Overcast Winter: December Entry

    I'm not trying to win, guys. The rule was i had to use a style different than my preffered, and a haiku was the first to pop into my head.
    Why hello there!

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