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![]() ![]() | Passing of the Torch (Jan Entry) Two kings and two queens all equally reign Over this wretched planet with Earth as it's name Every three months, one succeeds the last In an eternal cycle of present and past The first fills her reign with cold, arctic air As ice sheets the water in its frozen snare. The tiny snow crystals then fall from the sky, As the Lady of Winter makes cold water fly Her powerful grip chills the ivory land Yet all powers fade, and all parties disband As the Lady's time ends, a new woman appears Who is born out of Winter's cascading tears The tears part the snow and the grass starts to rise And the Duchess of Spring simply Laughs at her cries With a flick of the wrist, the sun pierces the clouds And life starts anew, in a brilliant green shroud The buds of the flowers begin open And the leaves of the trees begin growing again. But Spring cannot fulfill this quest on her own So she calls on another to sit in her throne The Lord of the Summer at that time is met To ensure the Spring's work will not end with regret Summer calls storm clouds to gather around To let loose their contents with a large, violent sound As the rains plummet downward, all beings rejoice As the life giving agent gives strength to Earth's voice Once this job is done, power changes once more As it's Summer's time now to open the door And usher in one final King of this land, The Ruler of Autumn, a gnarled branch in his hand. A swing of the branch cause outlooks to change, As once brilliant greens turn to shades that seem strange. Reds, browns, and yellows fill the senses of most As leaves gently dance downwards at the will of their Host. Once the last leaf falls, like the rain or the snow, Autumn leaves the throne, and begins to throw The cycle in motion once more it would seem Winter taking her place in this quarterly dream Infinite outcomes in each set of time, Yet the same task is finished with no reason or rhyme The wheel of time spins everlastingly on With the four rulers ready to pass the baton. |
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![]() | Re: Passing of the Torch (Jan Entry) Well... I really like this poem XD It is a very different view of seazons that I am used to seeing (I've only studied Latvian folklore about this though), for example, it is ussually a great celebration that spring fights and wins winter, while you put it as something rather cruel, and ussually the autumn colours are looked at as most beautiful etc. Also I liked your descriptions... the winter part was especially nice, or maybe it just seemed to me so because of the winter that is now ruling in UK >.< And the flow and rhyming is just great here ^^ Nice work Neo |
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