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Oct 11, 2007, 10:07 PM
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  Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: winnipeg
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 Credits: 7,327 | Perdition (Horror Theme) Dreary glows melting her eyes A magnetic pulse dancing in the stale air Computerized bliss She can clamp to reality no longer The poison allure of that screen beckons And she is back again, wilting Praising the intangible happiness it brings Leaving those who care in the past Hopping the high-speed bandwagon Green eyes turn gray and roll back Pasty white skin sits barely on the bone Computerized bliss, perdition She is nothing inside, desecrated Touched and torn by an invisible hand Where did her smile go? Her ruined spirit gone from this world Crushed not by flesh but by technology A horror story that is sadly true --- Well, I decided to try. Hopefully this is scary enough to fall into the category of horror. To elaborate though, the poem is the story of a young woman losing herself to a computer and eventually claiming forfeit to reality. Frightening, I think.
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Oct 12, 2007, 01:02 AM
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Credits: 58,560 | Re: Perdition (Horror Theme) Hmm... this is confusing.. i can't understand this poem T.T im so dumb... but i like the powerful wordings... and.. i think the poem is a bit like...lifeless,... hmm... not much "energy" in there  but this poem is abt a woman who lost her soul... yea...nicely done ^^ good luck to ya..  |
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Oct 12, 2007, 03:17 PM
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Credits: 10,645 | Re: Perdition (Horror Theme) like RayMe... Im unsure of how much I actaully understood of this poem myself. But, I've read alot of your work in the past, and I know that anything scary or twisted is right up your alley. Cheers to a flawed mind 
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Oct 12, 2007, 08:36 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ
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Credits: 6,148 | Re: Perdition (Horror Theme) Wow Flawed, I didn't know you did poetry. This was very descriptive and used very advanced words, something you tend not to see in most poems here. I always wait till the last minute to do mine, so I haven't entered yet, but good luck to u. 
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Oct 12, 2007, 09:53 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: winnipeg
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Credits: 7,327 | Re: Perdition (Horror Theme) Neh, how come no one gets it? Guess the author or the only one who sees the point sometimes ^^ Oodles of thanks to you guys, I ><> you.
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