shouldn't you finish it before posting it?i I've never seen in incomplete
poems posted before not even in a contest.
anyway it very patriotic so far cant really say much more till your done
What is good for one
is not always good for another
this decision is not carried out by your father
or your mother
By a group of people
who are supposed to be true
and believe souly and securly
in the red the white and the blue
They stand in the eye of the eagle
and under the 50 stared flag.
They don't work for the money
nor the indoubed right to brag.
They run this country
with an iron fist
and those who take advantage
find out the risks.
For freedom they stand
and for our Lady Liberty
Together so grand
protecting you, them, and me.
(Finished)
Last edited by starfire1036; Jun 03, 2009 at 08:08 PM.
shouldn't you finish it before posting it?i I've never seen in incomplete
poems posted before not even in a contest.
anyway it very patriotic so far cant really say much more till your done
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
I liking the poem so far looking forward to reading to complete piece.
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