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![]() AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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![]() ![]() | The Rain (9/8/07) I stand alone in the rain feeling the droplets hit my face. I can't tell if I am crying anymore, I can feel the embrace of my love. I am the one who is suppose to protect her, yet she is my sheath. My life has been like a drawn sword and she came along and sheath it. She became my protector and healer, I loved her with my heart and supported her. I could not protect her from the horrors that this world had shown me. Yet we never left each other and protected each other. Healed each other. Even loved each other. I asked her to marry me and she agreed. I thought I could protect her forever, yet Death threw it's joker and she died. I couldn't protect her and in my arms she said, "My life was empty till I met you, I was so happy to have fallen in love with you. I'll always be with you, my love". It was raining then. At her grave, I laid flowers and spoke to her. I wore her wedding ring around my neck. The pain became dull and I remembered. We had protected, healed and loved. I spoke, "I always love you and will never forget what you did for me." It began to raining again as I stood there. this is my entry for the POTM ^.^
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![]() | Re: The Rain (9/8/07) Wow... this is great @.@ It made me cry (a good sign ^^ lol) I'm quite speechless... a wonderful work @.@ I just love the first stranza... it's perfect!!! I could read it again and again... It tells everything already- in the begining... I really want more... |
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