Relationships

fireandice · Nov 02, 2007, 06:40 PM

Relationships

Beginning
Show your world to me
Play the melody of dreams
Bring laughter to life
Show the light of your smile
Lift my heart so it can soar

Life
Pledge your love to me
Together, not walk alone
Let's share everything
We’re both partners and lovers
Bonds so strong that none could break

Ending
Parting ways is hard
Living without you is tough
I'll never forget
Time will pass and pain will stop
Memories fade, hearts still beat

light ruler · Nov 07, 2007, 11:18 AM

good lol i liked it cause im in a relationship lol wait mostly everyone is lol hmm beginning life and end hmm i dont know if there is a life part lol or the end lol cause you barely remember lol jk

*divine_punishment* · Nov 23, 2007, 08:30 PM

Remember, Killer, punctuation is your friend. A well-placed comma or period - especially elipses and hyphens - might take your piece a step further into awesomeness and unforgettableness.

Nov 02, 2007, 06:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
fireandice ~always by your side~ Join Date: May 2007 Location: small little hick town Posts: 516 Thanks: 19 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 10,289	Relationships Relationships Beginning Show your world to me Play the melody of dreams Bring laughter to life Show the light of your smile Lift my heart so it can soar Life Pledge your love to me Together, not walk alone Let's share everything We’re both partners and lovers Bonds so strong that none could break Ending Parting ways is hard Living without you is tough I'll never forget Time will pass and pain will stop Memories fade, hearts still beat __________________ Last edited by fireandice; Nov 04, 2007 at 06:47 PM.
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Nov 07, 2007, 11:18 AM	#2 (permalink)
light ruler Newbie Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Mac^Anu Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 141	Re: Relationships good lol i liked it cause im in a relationship lol wait mostly everyone is lol hmm beginning life and end hmm i dont know if there is a life part lol or the end lol cause you barely remember lol jk
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Nov 23, 2007, 08:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
divine_punishment Shining Star Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Good question . . . where am I? Posts: 1,271 Thanks: 22 Thanked 27 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 59,219	Re: Relationships Remember, Killer, punctuation is your friend. A well-placed comma or period - especially elipses and hyphens - might take your piece a step further into awesomeness and unforgettableness. __________________ Bite Me!
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