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    Remembrance (childhood wishes)

    Christmas has always been, all white and snow,
    The excitement of knowing
    what my present is and who it is from.
    Memories that have been of being happy and fun.

    It makes me want to walk up to my tree
    Then i'll wish on that special star.
    It reminds me of secret wishes,
    And makes me work harder all through the year.

    It brought my family round singing silly songs,
    children can laugh and play all night long.
    It was a time when everyone was together,
    No matter if they were naughty or nice.

    I have often been told I was more naughty than nice
    Evryone said nice girls can have their wishes come true.
    All i have in my heart was to be with you,
    Yet in the smallest rooms of my heart my wish still burns.

    Even now that i am all grown up,
    I try to be as fair as i can.
    Still wishing that Christmas came more often.
    Maybe if maybe by some weird accident.

    And i know and feel it's just wishful thinking.
    Maybe if christmas came again
    Like the twelve months of the year,
    Maybe just maybe , when this wish comes true
    Finally I can be with you.
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    Re: Remembrance (childhood wishes)

    *sniff* beautiful. The idea of christmas being more than just presents and egg nog i find is rarely looked upon, haha. And i also like how the thing the character was remembering was one specific aspect of the time, not just the time in general
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    Re: Remembrance (childhood wishes)

    This didn't strike me as a memory of Christmas per say. I took it more to be about wishes coming true. You were remembering that "Christmas" feeling... Of getting what you wish for. As if you were thinking back to a time where being "nice", and working hard to be fair and righteous.... Meant that your hearts desire would be under your tree.
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    Re: Remembrance (childhood wishes)

    That was a very excellent poem. A poem is a wish that is full of heart and soul as Christmas is full of spirit and heart and heartwarmin feelings! Yeah now I cant wait for xmas!
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: Remembrance (childhood wishes)

    this poem sort of makes me feel fuzzy inside ,it made me smile as well
    that in itself is rare since im all about writing about life and the like but
    this poem really is great , i rememberd a lot of stuff i wished for this poem
    really brought back some memories for me thank you.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Remembrance (childhood wishes)

    I have to admit, that's a good poem, all the poems I write are usualy depressing in someways. Good job.

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    Re: Remembrance (childhood wishes)

    that's a really beautiful poem, you should really consider writing more. great job. ^^ ^_^

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