The Road to Nowhere-Journey's End (9/28)

Descended From Darkness · Sep 28, 2007, 04:27 PM

She walked alone
Wondering where to go
where to sleep
where to eat
somewhere to call home

She walked on the road
that everyone knew
lead nowhere
but she hoped it would lead
to somewhere.

She walked on the road
to nowhere and she hoped it
would lead to somewhere

Her body was found later
found in the desert
the flames of hope in her
heart still burned on
the hopeful twinkle
in her eyes
flickered until
she took her last
breath of life
and fell in the bitter
darkness of death
as her whole world
came crashing to a sudden
stop
and her long journey filled with
hope came to a startling end.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I wrote this at the start of the month just never bothered to submit it. ^__^U

*RayMe* · Sep 29, 2007, 01:47 AM

i really like this part...

"Her body was found later
found in the desert
the flames of hope in her
heart still burned on
the hopeful twinkle
in her eyes
flickered until
she took her last
breath of life
and fell in the bitter
darkness of death
as her whole world
came crashing to a sudden
stop
and her long journey filled with
hope came to a startling end."

this is a good poem...

keep up the good work.. and good luck to ya ^^

Sep 28, 2007, 04:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
Descended From Darkness Jigoku Shoujo Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: somewhere far far away from here. Posts: 505 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 9,751	The Road to Nowhere-Journey's End (9/28) She walked alone Wondering where to go where to sleep where to eat somewhere to call home She walked on the road that everyone knew lead nowhere but she hoped it would lead to somewhere. She walked on the road to nowhere and she hoped it would lead to somewhere Her body was found later found in the desert the flames of hope in her heart still burned on the hopeful twinkle in her eyes flickered until she took her last breath of life and fell in the bitter darkness of death as her whole world came crashing to a sudden stop and her long journey filled with hope came to a startling end. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I wrote this at the start of the month just never bothered to submit it. ^__^U __________________ Thanx zyta for the awesome set [ Rai's Gallery: Rai's myspace : Rai's Deviantart: Angelic Ruin:SpiritDetective
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Sep 29, 2007, 01:47 AM	#2 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,588 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 58,536	Re: The Road to Nowhere-Journey's End (9/28) i really like this part... "Her body was found later found in the desert the flames of hope in her heart still burned on the hopeful twinkle in her eyes flickered until she took her last breath of life and fell in the bitter darkness of death as her whole world came crashing to a sudden stop and her long journey filled with hope came to a startling end." this is a good poem... keep up the good work.. and good luck to ya ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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