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    The Road to Nowhere-Journey's End (9/28)

    She walked alone
    Wondering where to go
    where to sleep
    where to eat
    somewhere to call home

    She walked on the road
    that everyone knew
    lead nowhere
    but she hoped it would lead
    to somewhere.

    She walked on the road
    to nowhere and she hoped it
    would lead to somewhere

    Her body was found later
    found in the desert
    the flames of hope in her
    heart still burned on
    the hopeful twinkle
    in her eyes
    flickered until
    she took her last
    breath of life
    and fell in the bitter
    darkness of death
    as her whole world
    came crashing to a sudden
    stop
    and her long journey filled with
    hope came to a startling end.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I wrote this at the start of the month just never bothered to submit it. ^__^U

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    Re: The Road to Nowhere-Journey's End (9/28)

    i really like this part...

    "Her body was found later
    found in the desert
    the flames of hope in her
    heart still burned on
    the hopeful twinkle
    in her eyes
    flickered until
    she took her last
    breath of life
    and fell in the bitter
    darkness of death
    as her whole world
    came crashing to a sudden
    stop
    and her long journey filled with
    hope came to a startling end."


    this is a good poem... keep up the good work.. and good luck to ya ^^

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