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    Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    Fire plumes like Heaven’s flair, birds at flesh tear.
    To the sky, unfocused the dead eyes stare.
    Powerful men push peace and care aside.
    The young fight first when battalions collide.
    Only fools rejoice at news of warfare.

    The heart has no room for mercy anywhere.
    Hate eclipses a desire for what is fair.
    Victims body counts rise for someone’s pride.
    Fire plumes like Heaven’s flair.

    So murder goes on though none seem to care.
    Wives wait for men who will never be there.
    The Earth at the desert, with red tears, cried.
    Creativity makes madness its bride.
    Corpses keep the dunes from becoming bare.
    Fire plumes like Heaven’s flair.

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    I dedicate this to Dilon, Gangzekowski and all the other members of the 75th regiment who ranged out and never returned.
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    Re: Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW This is good.
    The world is full of fear and despair, that is is why we must find the light in this pit of darkness.


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    Re: Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    Quote Originally Posted by zangetsu412 View Post
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW This is good.
    Thank you Moon Cutter. While many of my experiences have been unique as long as I can connect with other people, especially through poetry, I will never feel alone.

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    Re: Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    Agreed, a very nice poem coming from you again. As expected? :P
    You are now breathing manually. :P

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    Re: Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    WOW beast another great poems.
    Its pretty deep and i completely agree with you on this poem.
    Its easy for the man in charge to sent people to fight because he is not the one who is going to die.
    nice good on this poem.

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    Re: Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    "Creativity makes madness it's bride"

    With all the ways we can kill others, I'd have to agree with you on this one.
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    Astonishing job as always. I really like this one. Deep and true. Great job

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    Re: Rondeau For Resting Souls Of Violence

    Thank you every body. It helps me to know that many people are reading my writing and on some level you are connecting with it. My love to you all!

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