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    A Search for Beauty

    Beauty is in all of us wether we see it or not
    It is what keeps our souls alive
    It is what makes colors of the earth dance with love
    It is what makes us express our true selfs to anyone

    Beauty is mother nature true desires
    It is what keeps it from wilting away into nothingness
    It is what stops true love from escaping from reality
    It is what I hold within me no matter what people try to say

    Beauty is a gift given from the true devine
    It is what we all hold within our hearts and soul
    It is what we express with every laugh
    It is when we bring new life into the world

    Beauty is what lies within
    not what lies on the skin
    Beauty is a present given to you
    Beauty is also what I have too
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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    Quote Originally Posted by Kiani Haki22 View Post
    Beauty is in all of us wether we see it or not
    Do you think this is true even for murderers?
    Quote Originally Posted by Kiani Haki22 View Post

    Beauty is what lies within
    not what lies on the skin
    I liked this part the best, and kinda wished that the enitre poem had this kind of rhyme to it.
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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    Yeah even for murders......their soul were just corrupted by evil that is all.
    and I wished it rhymed too but whenever I try to rhyme a poem it always sounds corny.

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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    Corny is bad, inspiration is good. Not everyone can make out something that can rhyme and sound perfect at every try. I won't say more as I'm supposed to be evaluating this piece right now.

    We'll see if yours shines brighter than the others soon enough.

    *goes to next poem*
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