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    A Search for Beauty -

    I searched for beauty
    And it tore me apart.
    Within love's keep
    And passion's embrace.


    I found that the search
    has brought me at the gate.
    I searched for beauty,
    It brought me to heaven's peak
    And hell's pain.

    I asked for a journey,
    and it has not ended to this day.
    Always dancing within an artist's reach
    Only to walk away again.


    The search for beauty,
    The eternal need for this artist's soul.
    Only to find my love to be expressed,
    Almost whole yet still incomplete.


    A search for beauty
    Something to be learned.
    Always something not so far from love
    And always ending up reaching for the heaven's above.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Re: A Search for Beauty -

    I like it how beauty always seems out of reach in this poem. Yet I consider that beauty can be anywhere. There can be many forms of beauty though, so this form could probably exist and often be one step farther than what he have reached thus far. A nice poem that doesn't rhyme, but a nice one none the less
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    Re: A Search for Beauty -

    i wanted it to look like an endless search for an artist who doesn't know how to be satisfied

    thank you very much
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