A Search for Beauty -

PhoenixSara · Jul 07, 2008, 01:03 PM

I searched for beauty
And it tore me apart.
Within love's keep
And passion's embrace.

I found that the search
has brought me at the gate.
I searched for beauty,
It brought me to heaven's peak
And hell's pain.

I asked for a journey,
and it has not ended to this day.
Always dancing within an artist's reach
Only to walk away again.

The search for beauty,
The eternal need for this artist's soul.
Only to find my love to be expressed,
Almost whole yet still incomplete.

A search for beauty
Something to be learned.
Always something not so far from love
And always ending up reaching for the heaven's above.

Soldat of life · Aug 02, 2008, 09:44 PM

I like it how beauty always seems out of reach in this poem. Yet I consider that beauty can be anywhere. There can be many forms of beauty though, so this form could probably exist and often be one step farther than what he have reached thus far. A nice poem that doesn't rhyme, but a nice one none the less

PhoenixSara · Aug 04, 2008, 12:42 PM

i wanted it to look like an endless search for an artist who doesn't know how to be satisfied

thank you very much

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PhoenixSara Rogue Vamp Slayer/Fallen Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I am in between Heaven's Gate and Hell.Angels are not supposed to fall but i did. Posts: 1,008 Thanks: 38 Thanked 56 Times in 52 Posts	A Search for Beauty - I searched for beauty And it tore me apart. Within love's keep And passion's embrace. I found that the search has brought me at the gate. I searched for beauty, It brought me to heaven's peak And hell's pain. I asked for a journey, and it has not ended to this day. Always dancing within an artist's reach Only to walk away again. The search for beauty, The eternal need for this artist's soul. Only to find my love to be expressed, Almost whole yet still incomplete. A search for beauty Something to be learned. Always something not so far from love And always ending up reaching for the heaven's above. __________________ "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends." Clan Rainstorm 2nd Company, Kunoichi Leader PhoenixSara Myspace / Click Me IMVU/Atlantis RPG/Rules and FAQ/MY BLOG /
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PhoenixSara Rogue Vamp Slayer/Fallen Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I am in between Heaven's Gate and Hell.Angels are not supposed to fall but i did. Posts: 1,008 Thanks: 38 Thanked 56 Times in 52 Posts	Re: A Search for Beauty - i wanted it to look like an endless search for an artist who doesn't know how to be satisfied thank you very much __________________ "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends." Clan Rainstorm 2nd Company, Kunoichi Leader PhoenixSara Myspace / Click Me IMVU/Atlantis RPG/Rules and FAQ/MY BLOG / Last edited by PhoenixSara; Aug 04, 2008 at 12:42 PM. Reason: edit
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