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    A Search for Beauty

    We all stand together, yet no one can see
    These masks which we wear bind our beauty

    A small, select few, take their time to see
    that outward reflections can truly deceive

    The porcelain chains which keep our mouths shut
    can hold back true nature, and spill out wounding cuts

    For rarely it is that these bindings will break
    and a step towards pure beauty the select few will take

    The select few then see reality
    Attractiveness isnt the same as beauty

    It's the sun shining down on dew covered grass
    or looking into a window of stained glass

    In beauty's glory we can thoroughly bask
    all we must do is remove the mask.
    Why hello there!

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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    I love this poem of yours it is beautiful......I think you did a very good job in making this poem......keep on writing.

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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    nice,it has a beautiful title. I think the meaning behind the poem is a very good message indeed.~~~

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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    That was honestly amazing. And it's so true!
    I absolutely love it.

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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    Rhyming from start to finish and a few nice deep words sprinkled about. Though ''select few'' was repeated once, it didn't see too awkward. Nice job!
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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
    Rhyming from start to finish and a few nice deep words sprinkled about. Though ''select few'' was repeated once, it didn't see too awkward. Nice job!
    i tried to make it sound as if there are only a handful of people who look past all of the superficial bulsh*t in our society (I.E. taking off the mask) and i didn't really know what else to call them.

    but thank you anyway!
    Why hello there!

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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    Quote Originally Posted by NeoDeath90 View Post
    We all stand together, yet no one can see
    These masks which we wear bind our beauty

    A small, select few, take their time to see
    that outward reflections can truly deceive

    The porcelain chains which keep our mouths shut
    can hold back true nature, and spill out wounding cuts

    For rarely it is that these bindings will break
    and a step towards pure beauty the select few will take

    The select few then see reality
    Attractiveness isnt the same as beauty

    It's the sun shining down on dew covered grass
    or looking into a window of stained glass

    In beauty's glory we can thoroughly bask
    all we must do is remove the mask.
    That was a buitiful and true poem u deseved to win it was awsome

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    Re: A Search for Beauty

    Beautiful job with the poetry! Very beautiful! ^_^

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