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    Song (potm Nov. Entry)

    on this night
    I've played my last good song
    so turn the record player on

    Odessa Chen




    Like a melody that never ends in your
    head , things just never seem to fit just
    right no matter the situation so play me
    a melody that will make things right.

    I've been down that road that seems to never
    end always hearing that melody that makes me
    question everything that should make since
    but doesn't.

    Playing at life seems to make the song play louder
    for far to long the melody seems to keep my life in
    a disorganised shambles that looks to have no end
    for me to say i can fix this.


    Life has a melody that seems to play for those
    who will listen and those who don't fail at life
    so miserably , the melody plays on and there's nothing
    we can do but dance to it in a spiral that never ends.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Song (potm Nov. Entry)

    I've been down that road that seems to never
    end always hearing that melody that makes me
    question everything that should make since
    but doesn't.
    sad line so sad and this is a good one.it makes you not want to be so sad. and i like the way you put the verse together to make it more fluid and free style even though it is based on a theme.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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