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    Stand Strong

    This poem goes out ot all those who oughta be
    going with the flow, instead of plotting methodically
    on ways to put pressure those they hate constantly.
    Instead of tryin' to find pure happiness periodically.

    Forget about the pain and the sorrow momentarily.
    You're looking up too hard at the sky--staring warily.
    Don't let yourself get too depressed, 'cause you're scarin' me.
    You should be focused on keeping that big smile primarily.

    Peace only comes to those who want to manually
    make an effort to change their situation annually.
    Every year, change makes your path even more challenging.
    Prepare for hurdles. Tobu--Err,--Jump! Oops, that was Japanese!

    Remember, though it seems that peace has faded from reality,
    It's still there, it just comes in between the battling.
    When you need them, your friends can be like your calvary.
    Don't let the negativity be fuel to quicken your maddening.

    Forget about the pain and the sorrow momentarily.
    You should be focused on keeping that big smile primarily.
    Stand strong...


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    Re: Stand Strong

    that was so awesome beyond words. it sounds ultra cool. i love it.

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    Re: Stand Strong

    Great work and discrpition totaly rocked me congratz u got a talent, hope you right more dude!

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    Re: Stand Strong

    I know... Its crossing the line for me to comment on your work. But, Im taking a chance. I thought this was absolutely the best poem I've ever read from you.

    And... Its about damn time you entered in POTM!!! I personally thought you should have submitted for the Tanka theme... You're always doing Haiku, and they are quite simular. You're already kind of seasoned in those types of structure. Not very many people entered last month either... So you could have easily taken it.

    Anyway... This is definately a potential winner. May the force be with you.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Stand Strong

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    I know... Its crossing the line for me to comment on your work. But, Im taking a chance. I thought this was absolutely the best poem I've ever read from you.

    And... Its about damn time you entered in POTM!!! I personally thought you should have submitted for the Tanka theme... You're always doing Haiku, and they are quite simular. You're already kind of seasoned in those types of structure. Not very many people entered last month either... So you could have easily taken it.

    Anyway... This is definately a potential winner. May the force be with you.
    LOL, thanks! I figured I should at least give POTM one shot. Y'know, see if I'm prizeworthy. ^_^ I was considering entering the Tanka themed POTM, but thought to myself, "It's one super-long haiku??" And kinda just drifted away. Anywho, thanks for your comments, I'm pleased to see you like my work. And... Aren't you supposed to be out of town? Why are you doing something you could've easily done from home? LOL.


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    Re: Stand Strong

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    LOL, thanks! I figured I should at least give POTM one shot. Y'know, see if I'm prizeworthy. ^_^ I was considering entering the Tanka themed POTM, but thought to myself, "It's one super-long haiku??" And kinda just drifted away. Anywho, thanks for your comments, I'm pleased to see you like my work. And... Aren't you supposed to be out of town? Why are you doing something you could've easily done from home? LOL.
    I like it Sprout definitely one of the best of read!!!

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