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| Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan...
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![]() Credits: 12,099 | Thank You I promised myself long ago That I would never cry again Because crying was a weakness I couldn't afford to show But as you tell me now How much you love me Saying that you would die for me Is making my eyes overflow So now, I'm not afraid to cry anymore Especially not in front of you You've shown me a way That I never knew exsisted So now I have to say As I lay here in your arms Thank you for showing me the light My one and only love |
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Shining Star Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Good question . . . where am I?
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,219 | Re: Thank You Ooh, interesting rhyme scheme. You don't see ABCA often . . . but the last two stanzas are free verse. Watch your punctuation; a well-placed period goes a long way. It's very beautiful and shows real potential; I hope to see more from you.
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