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    Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}


    Thoughts on Time

    The Morning

    Distaste for morning
    Too bright, too early, too much
    Sand still in my eyes
    Birds sing sour notes
    Waking irritations yawn.

    The Past

    Constantly haunting
    For one moment’s peace denied
    Self made chains bind
    Past, unshakeable shadows
    Old irritations, sadness.

    Time

    Please, make up your mind
    Either too fast, or too slow
    Always uncaring
    Watching time’s hands wave goodbye
    Tick-tock irritations, stress.
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    Re: Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}

    "Irritation".

    You like that word, mecha?

    Great poem, I just wish you hadn't used that word so much.

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    Re: Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}

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    Re: Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}

    Just came in to check the poem out since I saw the POTM winner thread. I am not very good with poems so I didn't get the first part of it, but "The Past" and "Time" is so true and hits home with me very much.

    'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something
    'Cause someday I might call you from my heart

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    Re: Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}

    Quote Originally Posted by Legend View Post
    Just came in to check the poem out since I saw the POTM winner thread. I am not very good with poems so I didn't get the first part of it, but "The Past" and "Time" is so true and hits home with me very much.
    Well the whole thing is about time, I guess I could've went with it being about the past present or future. The whole idea is that time is irritating though, and I currently have no gripe with the present or future. So I went with times that bother me the most, and time itself. I'm not a morning person, I don't like birds singing or anything that has to do with morning. That's the point behind the first one, that its just another irritations caused by time. Everyone that isn't a morning person can agree to that.
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