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Old Nov 29, 2007, 08:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}


Thoughts on Time

The Morning

Distaste for morning
Too bright, too early, too much
Sand still in my eyes
Birds sing sour notes
Waking irritations yawn.

The Past

Constantly haunting
For one moment’s peace denied
Self made chains bind
Past, unshakeable shadows
Old irritations, sadness.

Time

Please, make up your mind
Either too fast, or too slow
Always uncaring
Watching time’s hands wave goodbye
Tick-tock irritations, stress.
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Old Dec 10, 2007, 07:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}

"Irritation".

You like that word, mecha?

Great poem, I just wish you hadn't used that word so much.
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Re: Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}

the pome you rought was awsome and so cool
you should right more pomes on here i would love to read them
you have a great talent so keep it up and im shure
one day something rely good will happen *smiles*
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Re: Thoughts on Time {POTM Entry for Nov. 07}

Just came in to check the poem out since I saw the POTM winner thread. I am not very good with poems so I didn't get the first part of it, but "The Past" and "Time" is so true and hits home with me very much.
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Just came in to check the poem out since I saw the POTM winner thread. I am not very good with poems so I didn't get the first part of it, but "The Past" and "Time" is so true and hits home with me very much.
Well the whole thing is about time, I guess I could've went with it being about the past present or future. The whole idea is that time is irritating though, and I currently have no gripe with the present or future. So I went with times that bother me the most, and time itself. I'm not a morning person, I don't like birds singing or anything that has to do with morning. That's the point behind the first one, that its just another irritations caused by time. Everyone that isn't a morning person can agree to that.
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