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    through the looking glass (change sept. poetry contest)

    My life is lived like a reflection nothing is what
    it seems ,i walk down he street hearing sirens
    in the distance as i just wonder aimlessly. The change
    seems to move slow like floating clouds in the sky
    on a quiet day.

    Through the looking glass i want go, to see the
    change from another view where things could e normal
    and change comes like a new day , Always wanting
    to be see the change the looking glass seems the perfect
    get away.

    The world around me seems dismal and distant as i avoid
    the slow change wanting things to go faster ,wanting things to
    go better but life on this side is to harsh. The looking glass is
    where i want to go for change is what i need but i need it now
    for my life to be better.


    So the change i will take is through the looking glass , where
    life is always changing ,never being to slow for the sake of my
    sanity.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: through the looking glass (change sept. poetry contest)

    So the change i will take is through the looking glass , where
    life is always changing ,never being to slow for the sake of my
    sanity.
    i like this part and the entirety of the poem makes you remember that nothing in life is permamnent except change. and kinda like an alice in wonderland.
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