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Oct 31, 2007, 08:45 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: washington state
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 Credits: 2,228 | Too late When the doors are closed... and the lights go out... He comes out of the mists... waiting... watching.... you. You're the one he hungers for... the blade he holds dripping with blood... He lusts for yours... he must have it There's no other way... And there you are... in your room.. alone. Unknowing... so vulnerable and yet so young A heart so pure life so youthful Buy you are the one.... so im sorry..it must be done... And as you are sleeping... He comes from the dark shadows.. and raises the blade... He ignores the screams.. the pain he seees in her eyes... When there is no sound to be heard... He lifts up the blade... dripping with her blood.... Stabs his own saddened heart filled with grief... By death do lovers part..... |
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Oct 31, 2007, 10:48 PM
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| Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: IN A CRAZY HOUSE @_@
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Credits: 4,291 | Re: Too late wow what a cool poem i think its your best poem so far and congrats you got poem of the month i wish i was good like you *sigh* but one day ill be better than the best poem thingy guy in the world |
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Nov 01, 2007, 02:11 AM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 58,560 | Re: Too late wow.. i love the description you give... nicely done indeed...  i did not know you can do such a good poem.. this is good Keep it up~! and good luck to ya ^^ |
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