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    Too late

    When the doors are closed...
    and the lights go out...

    He comes out of the mists...

    You're the one he hungers for...
    the blade he holds dripping with blood...

    He lusts for yours...
    he must have it

    There's no other way...
    And there you are...
    in your room.. alone.

    so vulnerable
    and yet so young

    A heart so pure
    life so youthful

    Buy you are the one....
    so im must be done...

    And as you are sleeping...
    He comes from the dark shadows..
    and raises the blade...

    He ignores the screams..
    the pain he seees in her eyes...

    When there is no sound to be heard...

    He lifts up the blade...
    dripping with her blood....

    Stabs his own saddened heart
    filled with grief...

    By death do lovers part.....
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    Re: Too late

    wow what a cool poem i think its your best poem so far and congrats you got poem of the month i wish i was good like you *sigh* but one day ill be better than the best poem thingy guy in the world

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    Re: Too late

    wow.. i love the description you give... nicely done indeed... i did not know you can do such a good poem.. this is good

    Keep it up~! and good luck to ya ^^

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