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That was really good divine_punishment!!
All right . . . love poem, now. What can I say? She is my MUSE. If you don't know who William Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson (*gag*), and e.e. cummings are, do a google search and feel UTTER SHAME! Just kidding. (Most of the poem is modelled after Cummings' revolutionary style; it is a bit different, just to warn you.)
Trying to Write a Poem - for Kelly:
I'm Shakespeare on a good day,
(I'm Dickinson on a bad one),
But one thought of you and suddenly I'm
e.e. cummings
my pencil . . . skittering out of control, graphite
smudges on my thumb
grammar unheeded - a deadly sin in my book
all is
replaced
by the memory of your elusive
smile.
That was really good divine_punishment!!
Made by mi amigo Mveli2
Thanks. I don't know why I suddenly felt the urge to write like Cummings . . . I mean, I used to correct the grammar in his work.Originally Posted by tora_tora_yatta
That was really good divine_punishment!!
wow.. ^^ thats so sweet... (look at me sounding like a girl xD) ^^ nice nice
i like it.. keep up the good work and i wanna see more of urs..
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Read "Kelly's Song." I like it better than this one. The grammar is far less unsightly.wow.. ^^ thats so sweet... (look at me sounding like a girl xD) ^^ nice nice
i like it.. keep up the good work and i wanna see more of urs..
This'd look killer with a picture in it. One of a girl smiling or something, with the words/sentences placed at varied points...
Lovely, lovely!
the love you withhold is the pain you carry.
Since you submitted this one for POTM, I'm going to delete it from the general poetry area. POTM entries are open for comment, so you don't need to post it anywhere else. And just this once, I'll be kind and move your comments as well.
i'm actually used to seeing it, iread all poetry and have an anthology of my own being published so it's not that different, although i prefer the victorian style and acbd format
"expect the unexpected, life changes in an instant"
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