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Old Dec 26, 2007, 04:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Verge {12-26-07}

On verging Disposition
is the feeling of Madness
falling on Deaf ears
but being seen by All
who but Everyone
lifts no Finger to stop
a mad Dictator
on the Verge of Rising
Powerless is a Weapon
to the Strength of a
Mind
however releasing your
Spirit could
cause more Disparity
find in a Heart
Darkness and Light for in
The End
Nothing waits for every
Piece of a Disregarded
Soul
letting fall not
a Piece of the Puzzle


Out of the many I had this poem is probably the best I could find. And believe me, somehow, I wrote this in a slightly dazed state. I didn't understand it until 15 days after I wrote it, and that's when it hit me exactly how much I liked this one. ^_^
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Old Dec 27, 2007, 08:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Verge {12-26-07}

this is really interesting to me. im torn between the several ways you could take it. its over emphasized with the blod words but i think i like it like that. it reminds me of the power our country holds over us or maybe some higer being
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