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Great! Great! I love 'em. Im so glad you entered... I needed inspiration. For some reason... having to follow this Tanka structure has been difficult for me. You however, seemed to have no problem at all.
Poison
How can you live life?
You break the hearts of women.
You toy with their love.
You're a cold blooded creature.
Trust me. You'll reap what you sew.
A Game
Is that what this is?
Another move in your Game?
You're sick and twisted.
Y'know, Cheaters. always. loose.
And babe, you're cheating big time.
Deception
I thought this was love.
At least, that's what you told me.
"Forever, my love".
You promised me endless skies.
Guess I just wasn't your bird.
Last edited by The White Wolf; Nov 23, 2007 at 07:22 PM.
Great! Great! I love 'em. Im so glad you entered... I needed inspiration. For some reason... having to follow this Tanka structure has been difficult for me. You however, seemed to have no problem at all.
... Not Ever Again...
oooh.. this is interesting.. nicely done.....
yea... i dont think im participating this time.. *yawns* im having major writers block...
good luck whitey..me will supposrt u from the clan~ whooo~!! *raises flag of legion ketsueki*
Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
I'm BACK AO!
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My Siggy is in progress... just you wait... :3
The words in this poem are really good........
And even though the rhyme is off.......I still liked it
Nicely done!!!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
I wasn't going for rhyme.
But Thanks. =)
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