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    The White Wolf =)

    Poison

    How can you live life?
    You break the hearts of women.
    You toy with their love.
    You're a cold blooded creature.
    Trust me. You'll reap what you sew.

    A Game

    Is that what this is?
    Another move in your Game?
    You're sick and twisted.
    Y'know, Cheaters. always. loose.
    And babe, you're cheating big time.

    Deception

    I thought this was love.
    At least, that's what you told me.
    "Forever, my love".
    You promised me endless skies.
    Guess I just wasn't your bird.
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    Re: The White Wolf =)

    Great! Great! I love 'em. Im so glad you entered... I needed inspiration. For some reason... having to follow this Tanka structure has been difficult for me. You however, seemed to have no problem at all.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The White Wolf =)

    oooh.. this is interesting.. nicely done.. ...

    yea... i dont think im participating this time.. *yawns* im having major writers block...

    good luck whitey.. me will supposrt u from the clan~ whooo~!! *raises flag of legion ketsueki*

    Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
    I'm BACK AO!
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    Re: The White Wolf =)

    The words in this poem are really good........
    And even though the rhyme is off.......I still liked it
    Nicely done!!!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    I wasn't going for rhyme.

    But Thanks. =)

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