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    My First Attempt

    ok this is a first attemp at this its pretty
    new to me so i guess at what clips and stuff
    to add for the music . Anyway check it out
    and tell me what you think or gve m some
    advice on how i can make it better.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nI7bY47osk
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My First Attempt

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice
    ok this is a first attemp at this its pretty
    new to me so i guess at what clips and stuff
    to add for the music . Anyway check it out
    and tell me what you think or gve m some
    advice on how i can make it better.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nI7bY47osk
    For your first time...I would say it was really good and the Song Dynamite....Great Jod, but I think I like it when everyone is Fighting in there.

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    Re: My First Attempt

    I thought it was pretty good considering it was your first time. ^^ Nice choice of song and nice choice of anime. Good job brother!!!
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    Re: My First Attempt

    thanks sora i will try to put more fight secnes i the next one

    and thank you also muffin sis that was saliva who sung that song
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
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    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My First Attempt

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice
    thanks sora i will try to put more fight secnes i the next one

    and thank you also muffin sis that was saliva who sung that song
    Alright!!!

    I can't WAIT!!!

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: My First Attempt

    okay i'm gonna be a criticque here

    One, It would have bin better to put the fight scenes in rather than have the dialogue scenes coz it looks weird but u can show them screaming at the same time wen the singer screams as well to give it more effect.

    The ending didnt really suit the end of the song, it might have bin better having Vegeta doing his most powerful move at the end and then fading out.

    Either than tht it's a good first try

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    Re: My First Attempt

    cool i will remake this make this then and keep the song im going to find morre fight scenes and add them to the remake and thanks for the tip blade iwas sure of how to put the music acoring to the video but the remake will be better i think
    since i now know what i did wrong
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    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My First Attempt

    it's cool, but sora told you, you need to add more fighting scenes
    i think it's really good as a first time ^^ looking forward for your next




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