Thread: My First Attempt

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

ok this is a first attemp at this its pretty
new to me so i guess at what clips and stuff
to add for the music . Anyway check it out
and tell me what you think or gve m some
advice on how i can make it better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nI7bY47osk

For your first time...I would say it was really good and the Song Dynamite....Great Jod, but I think I like it when everyone is Fighting in there.

I thought it was pretty good considering it was your first time. ^^ Nice choice of song and nice choice of anime. Good job brother!!!

thanks sora i will try to put more fight secnes i the next one

and thank you also muffin sis that was saliva who sung that song

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

thanks sora i will try to put more fight secnes i the next one

and thank you also muffin sis that was saliva who sung that song

Alright!!!

I can't WAIT!!!

okay i'm gonna be a criticque here

One, It would have bin better to put the fight scenes in rather than have the dialogue scenes coz it looks weird but u can show them screaming at the same time wen the singer screams as well to give it more effect.

The ending didnt really suit the end of the song, it might have bin better having Vegeta doing his most powerful move at the end and then fading out.

Either than tht it's a good first try

cool i will remake this make this then and keep the song im going to find morre fight scenes and add them to the remake and thanks for the tip blade iwas sure of how to put the music acoring to the video but the remake will be better i think
since i now know what i did wrong

it's cool, but sora told you, you need to add more fighting scenes
i think it's really good as a first time ^^ looking forward for your next