My First Attempt

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jul 26, 2006, 09:07 PM

ok this is a first attemp at this its pretty
new to me so i guess at what clips and stuff
to add for the music . Anyway check it out
and tell me what you think or gve m some
advice on how i can make it better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nI7bY47osk

sora the king of dreams · Jul 26, 2006, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

ok this is a first attemp at this its pretty
new to me so i guess at what clips and stuff
to add for the music . Anyway check it out
and tell me what you think or gve m some
advice on how i can make it better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nI7bY47osk

For your first time...I would say it was really good and the Song Dynamite....Great Jod, but I think I like it when everyone is Fighting in there.

Atomic Muffin · Jul 26, 2006, 10:06 PM

I thought it was pretty good considering it was your first time. ^^ Nice choice of song and nice choice of anime.

Good job brother!!!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jul 26, 2006, 10:07 PM

thanks sora i will try to put more fight secnes i the next one

and thank you also muffin sis that was saliva who sung that song

sora the king of dreams · Jul 26, 2006, 11:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

thanks sora i will try to put more fight secnes i the next one

and thank you also muffin sis that was saliva who sung that song

Alright!!!

I can't WAIT!!!

*Blade X* · Jul 26, 2006, 11:59 PM

okay i'm gonna be a criticque here

One, It would have bin better to put the fight scenes in rather than have the dialogue scenes coz it looks weird but u can show them screaming at the same time wen the singer screams as well to give it more effect.

The ending didnt really suit the end of the song, it might have bin better having Vegeta doing his most powerful move at the end and then fading out.

Either than tht it's a good first try

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jul 27, 2006, 12:02 AM

cool i will remake this make this then and keep the song im going to find morre fight scenes and add them to the remake and thanks for the tip blade iwas sure of how to put the music acoring to the video but the remake will be better i think
since i now know what i did wrong

Nao Chan · Jul 27, 2006, 01:03 AM

it's cool, but sora told you, you need to add more fighting scenes
i think it's really good as a first time ^^ looking forward for your next

pigtaru · Jul 28, 2006, 08:39 PM

I like the upbeat music for fight scenes, but don't forget to experiment outside of your usually genre.

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jul 28, 2006, 08:44 PM

i know what you mean i have been trying to find an anime that goes with the moonlight sanata but i havnt found the right one yet i know you need vocals and stuff but i want to try a musical AMV but i am still debating this idea

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	My First Attempt ok this is a first attemp at this its pretty new to me so i guess at what clips and stuff to add for the music . Anyway check it out and tell me what you think or gve m some advice on how i can make it better. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nI7bY47osk __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Atomic Muffin Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In a pink hat and stolen sunglasses Posts: 76 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 265	Re: My First Attempt I thought it was pretty good considering it was your first time. ^^ Nice choice of song and nice choice of anime. Good job brother!!! __________________ §Myspace§ °Siggy by the wonderful Zaraki Kenpachi°
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	Re: My First Attempt thanks sora i will try to put more fight secnes i the next one and thank you also muffin sis that was saliva who sung that song __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,446	Re: My First Attempt okay i'm gonna be a criticque here One, It would have bin better to put the fight scenes in rather than have the dialogue scenes coz it looks weird but u can show them screaming at the same time wen the singer screams as well to give it more effect. The ending didnt really suit the end of the song, it might have bin better having Vegeta doing his most powerful move at the end and then fading out. Either than tht it's a good first try __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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Nao Chan Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: My Room Posts: 79 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 553	Re: My First Attempt it's cool, but sora told you, you need to add more fighting scenes i think it's really good as a first time ^^ looking forward for your next __________________
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	Re: My First Attempt i know what you mean i have been trying to find an anime that goes with the moonlight sanata but i havnt found the right one yet i know you need vocals and stuff but i want to try a musical AMV but i am still debating this idea __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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