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    Behind The Blue Rockies
    the sun is declining.

    The stars they comes stealing
    at the close of the day.

    Across the wide prairie
    our loved ones lie sleeping.

    Behind the dark forest
    in a place far away…
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    Re: Behind The Blue Rockies

    Awww...that sounds really romantic and it's short as well! Thats why I just love it! I wish to see more of your poems!
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    Re: Behind The Blue Rockies

    Yeah I have few more poems. Thanks You want to hear more of my poems?

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    Re: Behind The Blue Rockies

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryuji Askikaga View Post
    Yeah I have few more poems. Thanks You want to hear more of my poems?
    Of course I would! I like your poems right now! I think it's amazing reading them so YEAH!!!! Really! Sure!
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    Far Beyond

    Far Beyond
    To what I see.

    I see a soul fading
    away from me.

    I feel my heart
    is leaving me.

    Far Beyond to what I feel
    I feel my heart has left me…

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    Re: Far Beyond

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryuji Askikaga View Post
    Far Beyond
    To what I see.

    I see a soul fading
    away from me.

    I feel my heart
    is leaving me.

    Far Beyond to what I feel
    I feel my heart has left me…

    That was so great!!!! (Claps) I know other people will like your poem as well! Your just so great at these poems! So I do hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Behind The Blue Rockies

    I did a total of five poems and I'm trying to come up with more.

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