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    Confustion [5/05]

    What is it that I want time to time?
    Why do I need this life?

    I don’t have any selfish desires for myself
    Okay maybe some- but that’s normal

    And just like normal I’m confused…
    Of life, of money
    Of personality, looks
    Love, of lust

    Of everything!

    To achieve what I always long for
    Unlike normal – it, by no means, doesn't approach me
    Everything shatters again.

    Even though I search for a word that could at LEAST
    Describe a fraction of me - this wondering creation

    I’m nothing, just a lost and wandering person
    Who thinks he’s good
    But in fact I lack confidence

    I don’t know why I feel so hollow
    So cold and alone

    I don’t know why I’m confused,
    So lonely and pathetic
    I don’t know why I push myself again and again

    Why do I feel this repetitive pain?
    Why do all these factors bother me so much…

    What is my purpose
    Why am I even born…

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    Re: Confustion [5/05]

    awwwwww soo sad rave

    but most people go though that i even wonder why im born cos im good for nothin on like u your good at everything i mean it rave

    u shouldnt be confused in this world the next will be just as confusing

    ^__^

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    Re: Confustion [5/05]

    NO I'm not good at anything but that was a cute comment, thanks!

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    Re: Confustion [5/05]

    A really sad poem indeed...
    You can really feel confusion in it and you made me confused about this life too... I don't even know what more to say this time...
    I like this poem, it was nice to read it but sad and confusing... But that is ok it even makes it better I think...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Confustion [5/05]

    you are a very talented person and you know it!!!! it was a sad poem though... was you talking in real life or not???

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    Re: Confustion [5/05]

    This weeks contest ended on the fourth.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Confustion [5/05]

    Then could you please remove this to the normal poem section if you noticed that?

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