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    day by day

    I do what I do
    It is what it is
    And your opinion
    Doesnt mean shit

    I can hate myself
    I can be full of sorrow
    But this pain and suffering
    Is something you cant borrow

    Im sick of all these leaches
    Taking my uniquness away
    But it seems to happen
    More day by day

    I do what I do
    It is what it is
    And your opinion
    doesnt mean shit


    pls. tell me how it is its my first poem ive made

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    Re: day by day

    very cool poem i like it alot and
    i can relate to the wording people
    acting like you just so thay can get
    treated the same way or as most call
    them wanna be's lol.

    anyway its a very cool poem i like it alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: day by day

    Quote Originally Posted by levitatinganimelover View Post
    I do what I do
    It is what it is
    And your opinion
    Doesnt mean shit

    I can hate myself
    I can be full of sorrow
    But this pain and suffering
    Is something you cant borrow

    Im sick of all these leaches
    Taking my uniquness away
    But it seems to happen
    More day by day

    I do what I do
    It is what it is
    And your opinion
    doesnt mean shit


    pls. tell me how it is its my first poem ive made

    It's all right. For your first poem, I mean. Are you meaning to enter this in the contest or no? Because that is the section in which you posted this poem.

    To quote from Kasai's rules:
    *Post all entries for that week with the date displayed like this: Title{mm/dd}
    So edit your title if you plan on making this an entry. If not, well I'll stop because then i'll get points off for psuedo modding. ANd that hasn't happened in FOREVER.

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