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Jul 16, 2007, 05:34 PM
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 | The Day You Die {7/16/07} Well lets see how it does. The day you die I shall morn the loss The day you die The heavens shall weep The day you die My heart shall take the toll The day you die The pain shall be unbarebable The day you die And so on after I shall visit your grave Wondering Why I couldn't be there to save you The day you die So will my one and only true love Well what do ya think????
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Jul 16, 2007, 06:26 PM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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| Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07} This poem was just so great! I loved it so much! It was just so adorable, sweet and romantic in a way to me!!! I love these types of poems! I hope to see more! 
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Jul 16, 2007, 07:14 PM
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| Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :)  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: No where near, New York.
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| Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07} sad but still great hope to see more from this although it makes me sad*wipes away tears*rock on *runs to room* ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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Jul 17, 2007, 10:24 AM
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| Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07} Thanks to the both of you. .
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Jul 18, 2007, 05:10 PM
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| Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07} i love this poem its soooooo amazing actually its better than that so good words can't describe it love it
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Jul 18, 2007, 05:50 PM
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| Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07} Thanks.I dont really think is that good tho. .
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Jul 18, 2007, 07:54 PM
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| Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07} LOL of coarse it is so good! I loved it's so sad and I love sad peoms so very good job hope to see more!
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