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    The Day You Die {7/16/07}

    Well lets see how it does.

    The day you die

    I shall morn the loss

    The day you die

    The heavens shall weep

    The day you die

    My heart shall take the toll

    The day you die

    The pain shall be unbarebable

    The day you die

    And so on after

    I shall visit your grave

    Wondering Why

    I couldn't be there to save you

    The day you die

    So will my one and only true love

    Well what do ya think????

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    「Someone」 Goo Slasher Champion, Fish Kill Champion, Rapid Motion Champion, Cell-Out Champion, Sober Santa 2 Champion, Flower Girl Champion KuwiRules145 is off to a good start KuwiRules145's Avatar
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    Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07}

    This poem was just so great! I loved it so much! It was just so adorable, sweet and romantic in a way to me!!! I love these types of poems! I hope to see more!
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    Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07}

    sad but still great hope to see more from this although it makes me sad*wipes away tears*rock on *runs to room* ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07}

    Thanks to the both of you. .

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    Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07}

    i love this poem its soooooo amazing actually its better than that so good words can't describe it love it



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    Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07}

    Thanks.I dont really think is that good tho. .

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    Re: The Day You Die {7/16/07}

    LOL of coarse it is so good! I loved it's so sad and I love sad peoms so very good job hope to see more!



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