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Aug 01, 2007, 08:52 AM
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 | discomfort im sitting at the graveyard everyday there i stay watching as the lifeless bodies in the dug up earth decay no boy understands why i always want to stay no body understands why along the gates i stray they ask me if the smell makes my nose start to hurt i simply reply that it is only when mornings light shines when i fell discomfort |
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Aug 05, 2007, 12:04 PM
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| Re: discomfort wow I loved this! It seems sad to me and it was just wonderful! Good job hope to see more!^^
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Aug 06, 2007, 04:01 PM
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| Re: discomfort i loved this poem scary thoguh but its still very good description with it keep it up ♥~*The Princess*~♥ .... meow... 
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