discomfort

!levitatinganimelover · Aug 01, 2007, 07:52 AM

im sitting at the graveyard
everyday there i stay
watching as the lifeless bodies
in the dug up earth decay

no boy understands why
i always want to stay
no body understands why
along the gates i stray

they ask me if the smell
makes my nose start to hurt
i simply reply that it is only when
mornings light shines when i fell discomfort

!Akura13 · Aug 05, 2007, 11:04 AM

wow I loved this! It seems sad to me and it was just wonderful! Good job hope to see more!^^

iluvmyloser · Aug 06, 2007, 03:01 PM

i loved this poem scary thoguh but its still very good description with it keep it up ♥~*The Princess*~♥ .... meow...

!levitatinganimelover · Aug 07, 2007, 02:00 PM

lol thank you all for the comments

.................

Aug 01, 2007, 07:52 AM	#1 (permalink)
!levitatinganimelover Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 165 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -20	discomfort im sitting at the graveyard everyday there i stay watching as the lifeless bodies in the dug up earth decay no boy understands why i always want to stay no body understands why along the gates i stray they ask me if the smell makes my nose start to hurt i simply reply that it is only when mornings light shines when i fell discomfort
Status: Offline

Aug 05, 2007, 11:04 AM	#2 (permalink)
!Akura13 Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan... Posts: 638 Thanks: 9 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 12,099	Re: discomfort wow I loved this! It seems sad to me and it was just wonderful! Good job hope to see more!^^
Status: Offline

Aug 06, 2007, 03:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
iluvmyloser Àddïctëd tø \|ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ♥>>WHERE y0U WANNA bE??<<♥ Posts: 648 Thanks: 21 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 10,093	Re: discomfort i loved this poem scary thoguh but its still very good description with it keep it up ♥~The Princess~♥ .... meow... __________________ ♥~GRACIAS SAZZY!!!!! You rock!Bow down to your royal highness~♥ Join Animal Wonders.. <-- Click it!!!^^
Status: Offline

Aug 07, 2007, 02:00 PM	#4 (permalink)
!levitatinganimelover Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 165 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -20	Re: discomfort lol thank you all for the comments .................
Status: Offline

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community!	Anime Online Rulez!

Similar Threads
Thread	Thread Starter	Forum	Replies	Last Post
discomfort	levitatinganimelover	Poems	5	Aug 01, 2007 09:40 AM