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    discomfort

    im sitting at the graveyard
    everyday there i stay
    watching as the lifeless bodies
    in the dug up earth decay

    no boy understands why
    i always want to stay
    no body understands why
    along the gates i stray

    they ask me if the smell
    makes my nose start to hurt
    i simply reply that it is only when
    mornings light shines when i fell discomfort

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    Re: discomfort

    wow I loved this! It seems sad to me and it was just wonderful! Good job hope to see more!^^



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    Re: discomfort

    i loved this poem scary thoguh but its still very good description with it keep it up ♥~*The Princess*~♥ .... meow...
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: discomfort

    lol thank you all for the comments
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