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Old Aug 01, 2007, 08:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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discomfort

im sitting at the graveyard
everyday there i stay
watching as the lifeless bodies
in the dug up earth decay

no boy understands why
i always want to stay
no body understands why
along the gates i stray

they ask me if the smell
makes my nose start to hurt
i simply reply that it is only when
mornings light shines when i fell discomfort
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Old Aug 05, 2007, 12:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: discomfort

wow I loved this! It seems sad to me and it was just wonderful! Good job hope to see more!^^
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Old Aug 06, 2007, 04:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i loved this poem scary thoguh but its still very good description with it keep it up ♥~*The Princess*~♥ .... meow...
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Old Aug 07, 2007, 03:00 PM   #4 (permalink)
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lol thank you all for the comments
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