Guy in the bus {04/25}

And there he is,
As always on time,
At 6 p.m.
On the bus to Kolrein

I raise my head
As he passes me by
And his eyes meet mine
As if telling me hi!

My stop is here
So I crawl out the door
And our eyes meet again
As the rain starts to pour.

***

Again I’m here
Just waiting for him
And there he comes…
With a girl oh so slim.

I start to breath hard
For tears in my eyes
And this time leaving
I’m telling goodbyes.

Still the story doesn’t end
For we meet again
And this time I talk
As I should have done then.

With not thinking too much
I ask to him
For how he is
And his girl oh so slim…

Not wondering why
He told about Sam
To the girl from the bus
At 6 p.m.

“Sam’s my sister from Pert,”
Smiling he said,
“And if you’re wondering too
My name is Ed.”

Awwwww.....How cool of the poem is this. Its a great poem. You should make more.:D: Your real good at this to me.

Well... yeah... I like this one too, the other poems I wrote are nothing special... Shouldn't have even put them! :D
Thank you very much KuwiRules for the coment very nice of you!!! :) Hugs!

aaw thats a sweet poem i like it. it all turned out good. i smiled at the end :2thumbs:

Sweet!
xD
It's funny even though it's not a real incident, and also you could've described the guy more or could've said for how long have you known him for. You know...

Thank you Rave_Grip! :)
Yeh, maybe I shoud have described him better, but actually he's ment to be a stranger, the lyrical "me" knows him not. :)

Nice poem it had me thinking she was his girlfriend and he didn't like fat girls,but at the end it turned out to be his sister and he introduced her and himself to you eventhough I figured you already knew him which gave the story a good twist.

Thank you all, I'm happy to hear you liked it and that it made you smile and that you liked the idea!!!! :)