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    Re: Guy in the bus {04/25}

    Yeah! I really enjoyed reading this one. The story had a lovely twist =p Loved the way you made the lines short and sweet. Nice job.

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    Re: Guy in the bus {04/25}

    This poem is adorable. I loved it, Lasura! Somewhere along reading the poem, the song "You're Beautiful" by James Blunt came into my head. Great poem. I liked the storyline behind it.

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    Re: Guy in the bus {04/25}

    Thank you elie and White Wolf very, very much!!! Hugs! I just love the fact you love it!
    Yeah, I guess "Beautiful" by James Blunt can be put together with this poem... it's about the same situation...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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