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    Happy Father's Day [06/10]

    I've heard its a glorious moment
    the first time you see your child
    that sweet sweet face
    possesed of an urge to pinch
    rosey red cheeks
    a parent sees their child
    as the greatest beauty

    But for some this gift is neglected
    rejected and turned away
    too much of a burden
    for your way of life
    you toss out that child
    in favor of other delights

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Oh how quickly they grow!
    as she celebrates another birthday
    pink ribbons, red rosses and bright balloons
    yes there's a smile
    while she prepares to blow out those melting candles
    but her eyes are still searching the room
    I'm sorry Sweet, Sweet child
    again he couldnt make it
    a few tears are spilt
    but childern are resilient
    and a phone call or card later
    will fuel her hopes once more
    its ok theres always next year
    but next year he never comes

    No longer a child
    but a grown woman now
    staring at the calendar
    she remembers the endeless moments of dissapointment
    waiting by the phone
    that empty seat at graduation
    every single holiday

    it has finally hit

    the one he helped
    give life to
    he ignored all along
    now, gone are those chances
    to secure familial bonds
    memories that should have been happy
    are bitter and still raw
    Pain clenches her fist
    crumbling a paper
    as she tosses it into the fire
    one last word is visible for just a second
    then turns to ashes...
    Father


    (^-^ I have't yet submitted a POTW so heres my first try hope you enjoy)

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    Re: Happy Father's Day [06/10]

    i love how you did this poem it
    really gets you thinking alot
    on how parents seem to find
    other things to feel there time
    when they dont want to have there
    child there.

    it is sad but it happens more than it should
    it gets me thinking about me and my dad a
    bit because he lives a not to far from me but
    we never really talk but i guess its because we
    have an understanding that we do love each other.

    this poem really does say things that most would
    rather not think on and i like that , maybe i will talk to
    me dad today this poem has me thinking now....thanks
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Happy Father's Day [06/10]

    aww thanks for the comment
    my dad doesnt even live in the same country anymore >.< but its cool that you have an understanding with yours

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