I see endless shadows
As I walk this feild of despaire
I think of everything that's
Happened to me and I fall
I just lay there
Crying so hard
Because my life has had
So many dissapoitments
Deaths of loved ones
So many heart breakes
But then I stop and think
I have to move on
Because I can't let sadness
Rule my life.....
A very nice poem indeed, I like it a lot, I really do... it's very interesting, it's very dark but vey optimistic at the same time... cool!!! Nice work here Akura!!!
But you should have put the date after the title, remember? ^^ Ask a mod to do that for you ^^
I really ejoyed reading this poem, as well as many other of your poems... nice work indeed!
I love this poem!!!!!!!!! It's so dark, sad and true that sadness over comes sometimes!!!! So This poem was awesome!!!!!! GO GO GO AKURA!!!!!! Hope to see more! :D:
Thank you all so much hope it wins!! :D:
good work akura13 i love this poem its sad at the begginig but at the end she figures out she figures out she has 2 go on♥