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Jul 09, 2007, 01:26 PM
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| Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan...
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 Credits: 12,099 | Hope! I see endless shadows As I walk this feild of despaire I think of everything that's Happened to me and I fall I just lay there Crying so hard Because my life has had So many dissapoitments Brutal beatings Losing friends Deaths of loved ones So many heart breakes But then I stop and think I have to move on Because I can't let sadness Rule my life..... Last edited by Akura13; Jul 09, 2007 at 01:45 PM. |
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Jul 09, 2007, 01:31 PM
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Credits: 49,122 | Re: Hope! A very nice poem indeed, I like it a lot, I really do... it's very interesting, it's very dark but vey optimistic at the same time... cool!!! Nice work here Akura!!! But you should have put the date after the title, remember? ^^ Ask a mod to do that for you ^^ I really ejoyed reading this poem, as well as many other of your poems... nice work indeed! |
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Jul 09, 2007, 02:36 PM
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  ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,154 | Re: Hope! I love this poem!!!!!!!!! It's so dark, sad and true that sadness over comes sometimes!!!! So This poem was awesome!!!!!! GO GO GO AKURA!!!!!! Hope to see more! 
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Jul 09, 2007, 07:52 PM
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| Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :)  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ♥>>WHERE y0U WANNA bE??<<♥
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Credits: 10,093 | Re: Hope! good work akura13 i love this poem its sad at the begginig but at the end she figures out she figures out she has 2 go on♥
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