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    Hope!

    I see endless shadows
    As I walk this feild of despaire
    I think of everything that's
    Happened to me and I fall

    I just lay there
    Crying so hard
    Because my life has had
    So many dissapoitments

    Brutal beatings
    Losing friends
    Deaths of loved ones
    So many heart breakes

    But then I stop and think
    I have to move on
    Because I can't let sadness
    Rule my life.....
    Last edited by Akura13; Jul 09, 2007 at 01:45 PM.



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    Re: Hope!

    A very nice poem indeed, I like it a lot, I really do... it's very interesting, it's very dark but vey optimistic at the same time... cool!!! Nice work here Akura!!!

    But you should have put the date after the title, remember? ^^ Ask a mod to do that for you ^^

    I really ejoyed reading this poem, as well as many other of your poems... nice work indeed!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Hope!

    I love this poem!!!!!!!!! It's so dark, sad and true that sadness over comes sometimes!!!! So This poem was awesome!!!!!! GO GO GO AKURA!!!!!! Hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Hope!

    Thank you all so much hope it wins!!



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    Re: Hope!

    good work akura13 i love this poem its sad at the begginig but at the end she figures out she figures out she has 2 go on♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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