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    Keep Going {4/24}

    Keep Going

    Planning on reaching my dream.
    Climbing up the stairs of success.
    Been going up for a long time.
    Holding tightly onto that rail.

    I'm almost there!

    I miss a stair step, and trip.
    Those at the top stare down, and laugh.
    They laugh at me.
    They throw rocks down at me,
    trying to get me to fall.

    My fingers start to slip,
    and I can no longer hold on.
    But. My dream-
    That craving inside me. I cannot ignore it.
    I will not ignore it. Keep Going.

    I close my eyes, and hope that help will come along the way.
    That someone will save me from this misfortune.
    But no one is there. No one is on my staircase.
    It is mine alone.
    Those with the rocks are no longer there.

    I've been pushed back on my feet.
    I race towards the top,
    the exhiliration of it all engulfing my whole body.
    I make it.
    I made it.

    I'm there.

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    Re: Keep Going {4/24}

    Nice poem and avatar since I have the show. Your poem rules. Sorry for getting out of subject but nice poem.
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    Re: Keep Going {4/24}

    Nice poem it gives others the courage to reach their dreams and goals too.
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    Re: Keep Going {4/24}

    Ohhhhh Wolf I like this one
    the courage to keep going no matter the obstacles
    no matter how badly you want to give up
    thats a really good theme
    good work Wolf >.<

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    Re: Keep Going {4/24}

    This is wonderful!!! I especialy like the last two stanzas!!! It could encourage almost everyone to fight and to keep going!!! I really like this!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Keep Going {4/24}

    Dammit.
    I mean...

    I never knew you were so good. Okay I did after you won the poem competetion
    Now to the poem-
    Very good. No errors whatsoever and nice images are created in my mind.

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