Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21)

dreaming saturn · Jun 19, 2007, 06:54 PM

Oh, humankind,
What have you done to the earth?
You are parading your wisdom,
And the earth can’t help but lament,
You are continuously inflating yourself,
Leaving the earth in misery.

Oh, humankind,
What are you doing to the earth?
You are indulging yourself in modern development,
And the earth is weeping all day long.

Oh, humankind,
What are you to do now?

Let not the earth weep anymore!

halo3master · Jun 19, 2007, 09:01 PM

your right we are destroying the earth but we cant stop until we all die or do it to another planet great poem ive never looked at that way

*Lasura* · Jun 20, 2007, 10:30 AM

A nice poem, I respect everyone who can write something good about something that is not feelings because I can't ^^ lol

The fact that you're trying to bring people attention to this fact is great and the poem itsef is great... enjoyed reading it.
I'll be waiting forward for something more from you!

dreaming saturn · Jun 20, 2007, 06:46 PM

Thanks Lasura.

Hmmm.... I don't know if this poem can be categorized 'environment awareness poem'.
I was thinking to enter another poem contest with this poem. But, I don’t think it’s good enough.

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dreaming saturn Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21) Oh, humankind, What have you done to the earth? You are parading your wisdom, And the earth can’t help but lament, You are continuously inflating yourself, Leaving the earth in misery. Oh, humankind, What are you doing to the earth? You are indulging yourself in modern development, And the earth is weeping all day long. Oh, humankind, What are you to do now? Let not the earth weep anymore!
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halo3master Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: covenant homeplanet Posts: 333 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 425	Re: Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21) your right we are destroying the earth but we cant stop until we all die or do it to another planet great poem ive never looked at that way __________________
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,866 Thanks: 56 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 49,122	Re: Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21) A nice poem, I respect everyone who can write something good about something that is not feelings because I can't ^^ lol The fact that you're trying to bring people attention to this fact is great and the poem itsef is great... enjoyed reading it. I'll be waiting forward for something more from you! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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dreaming saturn Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21) Thanks Lasura. Hmmm.... I don't know if this poem can be categorized 'environment awareness poem'. I was thinking to enter another poem contest with this poem. But, I don’t think it’s good enough.
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