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    Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21)

    Oh, humankind,
    What have you done to the earth?
    You are parading your wisdom,
    And the earth can’t help but lament,
    You are continuously inflating yourself,
    Leaving the earth in misery.

    Oh, humankind,
    What are you doing to the earth?
    You are indulging yourself in modern development,
    And the earth is weeping all day long.

    Oh, humankind,
    What are you to do now?

    Let not the earth weep anymore!

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    Re: Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21)

    your right we are destroying the earth but we cant stop until we all die or do it to another planet great poem ive never looked at that way

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    Re: Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21)

    A nice poem, I respect everyone who can write something good about something that is not feelings because I can't ^^ lol

    The fact that you're trying to bring people attention to this fact is great and the poem itsef is great... enjoyed reading it.
    I'll be waiting forward for something more from you!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Let Not The Earth Weep Anymore (06/21)

    Thanks Lasura.
    Hmmm.... I don't know if this poem can be categorized 'environment awareness poem'.
    I was thinking to enter another poem contest with this poem. But, I don’t think it’s good enough.

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