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    Longing.... {05/04}

    There are times
    When I just need you by my side,
    When I just feel like dying here-
    Without you…

    Sick and tired of all this,
    Lost and frightened,
    Hiding in the dark…

    No moon in the sky
    No love by my side

    Tears breaking out and flowing down my cheeks
    Can’t stand the pain inside….
    Can’t stand the cold outside…

    No air to breathe
    No dreams to hold

    I just want to pass away
    And wake up in your arms


    Written a long time ago when in love and longing….

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Longing.... {05/04}

    Very heartwarming poem You're a very good poet and I love the flow and the wordings

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    Re: Longing.... {05/04}

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Very heartwarming poem You're a very good poet and I love the flow and the wordings
    Thank You very much Rave!!!!! I'm happy you liked it!
    It's nice of you ti say I'm a good poet, though I really doubt it...
    I myslef like this poem because I wrote it a long time ago and still, reading it now I remember how i felt writting it...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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