I know what Kasai would say... but I found the "climax" part funny. No offenceI like it, it's reality, the depth... everything.
Darn.. i sound a little stupid on this 1.. but i got no other available entries.. ~.~ sheesh
Mountains
I am standing near the daring mountains.
I looked high to the top,
it seems little from the bottom.
I grinned to my self...
"I shall conquer this one," i said.
With all gears ready i started to hike.
Slowly i went up,
towards the sky.
It gets harder and tiresome,
once i reach halfway of it.
For the air is getting thinner.
Full of sharp rock,
thorns, beasts, and winding roads.
I must continue for i must reach the summit.
I struggle and i sweat though the air is cold.
It is what everyone must do in order to succeed.
To reach the climax of their lives,
before reaching the ending.
For the ones who has surpass the tests,
they are the hardworking ones.
The ones who has achieved glory and success,
and the goal of their lives.
Last edited by RayMe; May 02, 2007 at 12:51 PM.
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I know what Kasai would say... but I found the "climax" part funny. No offenceI like it, it's reality, the depth... everything.
Very good poem it makes me think about climbing a mountain too.
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I liked the thought about fighting, working hard- doing everything to suceed... You've done a good job with explaining how you "strugg"to reach your goals! Earth and mountins is not my element so I couldn't imagine me climbing a mountin but the idea of your poem repaid that.Good work Ray!
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