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    The path goes on {04/23}

    So I see I'll be the first one to post my entry... I hope I do everything right...
    This poem is my first for a reaaaally long time so... You now what to await, I'm ready for though judgments!
    At first it was just to explain the words on my signature, now it's ment for some people too... I hope youenjoy reading it...

    The path goes on....
    Open your eyes,
    Wipe away your tears,
    Stand up and smile
    The Path goes on…

    Forget about the pain,
    Forget about the tears,
    Forget about your past…
    The Path goes on…

    Even though you see but dark,
    Even though you see no friends,
    Stand up and fight…
    Never give up…

    And amidst all the pain,
    Amidst all evil and sad
    There’s always a smile,
    There’s always a light…

    Take my hand if you need it…
    I have enough light in my heart…

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: The path goes on {04/23}

    I really like your poem it was sweet and kinda romantic. I look forward to reading your next one.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: The path goes on {04/23}

    Thank you verry much!!!! You can't imagine how happy the fact that someone liked this poem makes me!!! I think I might writte something more... we'll see!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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