POTW Winner {4/30 - 5/4}

Chiefblackhammer · May 14, 2007, 06:05 AM

Sorry about the hold up people, voting for the POTW {5/7 - 5/11} will begin shortly, as well the POTW {5/14 - 5/18} is now open for submissions.

Congrads to the POTW Winner {4/30 - 5/4}

-=Broken^Halo=-

Quote:

Strangled Oppression.

Tapestries of death woven bone,
Antlers lured to gore stone.
Knuckled chandeliers collapsed calamity.
Finger tip etchings fallen to insanity.

Embroideries of pain caressed empathy,
Organ symphonies composed cacophony.
Threading dismal needles entwined,
Protruding and winding into swine.

Oppressed and depressed, we confess.
Carrying filth and beggars of tress,
Grotesque dirt spilling across corpus,
Damned social ill pressed populace.

Leashes linked to broken backs,
Carriers diseased with worthless tracks,
A worthless world of trusting lies.
We cry for the one who never dies.

dreaming saturn · May 17, 2007, 08:00 PM

Congratulations, =Broken^Halo=.
I like the rhymes in your poem, although I've problem understand the meaning of your poem.

May 17, 2007, 08:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
dreaming saturn Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: POTW Winner {4/30 - 5/4} Congratulations, =Broken^Halo=. I like the rhymes in your poem, although I've problem understand the meaning of your poem.
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