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    Realizing.{4/27}

    Why ignorance is bliss?
    Is it because you ignore the world and reside in your own tiny body?

    Or is it just because you want to be alone and never remembered?
    Or just watch your nemesis suffer in front of you?

    To let everything out
    Without being chased by the impenetrable darkness

    And

    To be consumed to just be burned by hatred until you lose it

    To let go of the angst that blisters within you
    And to forget of the people that caused you to be in this state of mind

    “Turn psychotic”
    I feel anger, hatred and jealousy

    “Yell and be free”
    I don’t want anything holding me back

    “Smack the crap out of them arrogants”
    And just be one of them.

    I don’t what I’m fighting for
    I don’t know why I yell
    I don’t know why I instigate
    Or just think it will be all right

    I try to escape out of this prison
    Breathing deeply I realize
    I hurt much more

    I’ll paint it on my walls
    Or even scribble it on my flesh

    Never to scream and fight again
    Because I don’t want to be the one
    Who is always lost.

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    Re: Realizing.

    Another poem that just seems to freak me out (not because it's bad or smth., it makes me to become scared)... You can feel a lot of anger and sadness in this one and it makes it really interesting to read. This is a really good poem, I think, made my heart beat faster, I like the way you wrote it, the way it sounds in your head when you read it...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Realizing.

    Rave, you do realize that the contest has already ended its deadline to submit any poems.

    To quote from Kasai:
    The first POTW shall begin on: 4/22 and end on 4/27.

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    Re: Realizing.

    However, I will make this an entry for 4/27 seeing as we do not have one for that day. Is that fine with you?
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    Re: Realizing.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    However, I will make this an entry for 4/27 seeing as we do not have one for that day. Is that fine with you?
    That does make sense. Since no poem was submitted yesterday, I don't see why we wouldn't be able to fill in the blank.

    All right, Kasai. It's fine. I'm sure Rave is fine with it as well.

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    Re: Realizing.

    Yes that is fine by me, I forgot to put it because I had to leave in a hurry. Thanks you.

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    Re: Realizing.

    aww rave this poem was awsome
    i loved the last few lines ^^

    lots of emotions have been taken into words in this poem
    witch i can understand
    great job
    and good luck rave kk ^^,

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    Re: Realizing.

    Nice poem although it's a little freaky which makes it that more interesting. Keep up the good work.
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