Saving Grace {4/23}

gren · Apr 23, 2007, 04:32 PM

Saving Grace

I've heard it said
that there is only
One True Path for All,
that there is only One Saving Grace.

Lies.

For you
and you alone,
Salvation lies in the Flesh.
Redemption exists within me.

Cleanse your Heart
in this soft delta
and Purge your Soul
with heat and sweat.

Cast off your Doubts;
let them fall to the floor,
Lay down your Fears
and take of this body.

Push your Faith into me,
and Fill me with your Prayers;
Believe,
and Accept the Grace
of your Goddess.

Your Altar spreads before you,
come Worship and be Saved.

*RayMe* · Apr 23, 2007, 04:38 PM

ahh.. the vocabulary... vastly used ^^ im think im looking at the winner's
poem here.. ~.~ high chance of winning...

*Kasai* · Apr 23, 2007, 06:42 PM

Well, Gren... How do you keep pushing out these poems? I love your wording.

AngelFlow · Apr 23, 2007, 06:51 PM

Wow. Great poem! I'm really amazed on how you can write it. Haven't really seen a poem written like this here lately. Good work!

KimiFemi · Apr 23, 2007, 07:04 PM

hey gren great job it talks about taking a leap in faith but all is said with feirce passion. I love it. its like two stories in one >.<

CherryBlossom18 · Apr 24, 2007, 12:32 AM

Very inspiring poem it was well written and kinda sweet.

Apr 23, 2007, 04:32 PM	#1 (permalink)
gren Knife-chan Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 836 Thanks: 0 Thanked 18 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 15,160	Saving Grace {4/23} Saving Grace I've heard it said that there is only One True Path for All, that there is only One Saving Grace. Lies. For you and you alone, Salvation lies in the Flesh. Redemption exists within me. Cleanse your Heart in this soft delta and Purge your Soul with heat and sweat. Cast off your Doubts; let them fall to the floor, Lay down your Fears and take of this body. Push your Faith into me, and Fill me with your Prayers; Believe, and Accept the Grace of your Goddess. Your Altar spreads before you, come Worship and be Saved. __________________ Gren's Music sig by zyta Say Hi
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Apr 23, 2007, 04:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,589 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 58,560	Re: Saving Grace {4/23} ahh.. the vocabulary... vastly used ^^ im think im looking at the winner's poem here.. ~.~ high chance of winning... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,380	Re: Saving Grace {4/23} Well, Gren... How do you keep pushing out these poems? I love your wording. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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AngelFlow Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Home Posts: 141 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,066	Re: Saving Grace {4/23} Wow. Great poem! I'm really amazed on how you can write it. Haven't really seen a poem written like this here lately. Good work!
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KimiFemi Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: So many places... I cant remember ... Posts: 476 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,554	Re: Saving Grace {4/23} hey gren great job it talks about taking a leap in faith but all is said with feirce passion. I love it. its like two stories in one >.< __________________ Secret Love "Love everyone unless they dont love you back" http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_d...ex.php?act=idx
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,166	Re: Saving Grace {4/23} Very inspiring poem it was well written and kinda sweet. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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