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May 15, 2007, 02:55 PM
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  Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2006 Location: Home of the Stragglers Moon
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 Credits: 3,357 | Short One {5/15} I have a really realy short one, but I though that it was decent...I dont know it this is accepted but heres a try... Violent eyes, and broken noses, along with the faint scent of roses
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May 15, 2007, 03:09 PM
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 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,177 | Re: Short One {5/15} Wow this a short one but a good one as well. I like it since its short and good. I bet it would of been good long too oh well hope to see more in the future! 
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May 16, 2007, 11:04 AM
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 Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,122 | Re: Short One {5/15} Quote:
 I like this poem of yours quite well, the scene you're creating is really interesting, the only tihng I don't like a lot is the second line, it's somehow too... simple, it makes me smile, though if it was your aim, then I understand... | |
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Jun 26, 2007, 12:15 AM
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 Newbie  Join Date: May 2006 Location: Anywhere out of this world...
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Credits: 1,127 | Re: Short One {5/15} Gah, intense...it has a fascinating impact on you even though it's length. I love it and you!
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