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Old May 15, 2007, 02:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Short One {5/15}

I have a really realy short one, but I though that it was decent...I dont know it this is accepted but heres a try...

Violent eyes,
and broken noses,
along with the faint scent of roses
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Old May 15, 2007, 03:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Short One {5/15}

Wow this a short one but a good one as well. I like it since its short and good. I bet it would of been good long too oh well hope to see more in the future!
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Re: Short One {5/15}

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I have a really realy short one, but I though that it was decent...I dont know it this is accepted but heres a try...

Violent eyes,
and broken noses,
along with the faint scent of roses
You could call that one a haiku!
I like this poem of yours quite well, the scene you're creating is really interesting, the only tihng I don't like a lot is the second line, it's somehow too... simple, it makes me smile, though if it was your aim, then I understand...
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Gah, intense...it has a fascinating impact on you even though it's length. I love it and you!
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