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    Water {06/08}

    Water to wash it all
    Water to purify it all
    Water to set me free
    Water to let me be

    *splash*
    I wash my face with water oh so cold...
    It takes away my tears as well as my pain...
    I cry, hiding my face in my wet hands
    Hoping that no one did notice me breaking there...

    I sit down and watch the water flow...
    A sight breaks out of my mouth
    I take a look in the mirror- at my red eyes
    I wipe away my last tears and put on a smile

    And I walk back to everything...
    Walk back to face what I fear
    To face what hurt me and whom hurt I
    To face those who get worried
    To face them with a sad smile...
    Last edited by Lasura; Jun 09, 2007 at 02:45 AM.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Water

    very cool poem i like this
    alot and hiding that pain
    with water dosnt always help
    but it does help you wash some
    of those tears off so you can show
    your bravery in the front of pain.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Water

    ^^ thank you for the comment Chris... you got the idea just right...
    This poem is just the fruit of a moments inspiration...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Water

    This poem is very confusing. I don't understand the basis of it all. The center.

    Lasura, edit the title if you mean to make this an entry.
    To quote from Kasai's rules:
    *Post all entries for that week with the date displayed like this: Title{mm/dd}

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    Re: Water

    Ups... sorry White Wolf.... damn I forgot myself... duh!!! ^^ I really shouldn't post anything when I'm upset...
    Now... how do you change the title?

    The basis? It's just about how you try to hide your tears and pretend everything is alright so your friends wouldn't worry and your enemies wouldn't start celebrating victory...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Water {06/08}

    This poem is really insipiring and as well very appasionate to the part of hiding the tears away this poem should be an interesting life that really best describes itself from the beginning and also it reasons on how to confront the fear that we cannot face including on to put a smile other then a cold breakout you are really great with poems Lasura i appreciate it well i would love to see more in the future.

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    Re: Water

    it was good i liked it but i would give it very good at best but good job i look forward to seening more poems from you.

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    Re: Water

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Now... how do you change the title?
    You can always PM a staff member, asking for such help, Laura.

    Title display has been corrected. Good luck to you!

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