Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21}
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Originally Posted by
RayMe 
Hmm.. @.@ nice...happy to know that u have ur ways on releasing ur stress..
and anger and stuff... ^^ sheesh...all i got is my little "sanctuary" *laughs*
Good job ~! I wanna see more of ur work~! ^^
Yea... sad that I'm moving away and won't be able to do these things... I guess there won't be such places in London...
I'm glad to hear you liked this poem ^^ and there are more somewhere around here...
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Originally Posted by
elie26 Lovely poem there, Lasura. The way you ended it felt as if you've woken up with a different view of the world, .. what a meaningful walk indeed ;) Very positive vibe, nice descriptions. Great job :D
Why thank you Elie, I'm really glad you liked this poem so much... and I'm glad that this time everyone understands what I meant with this poem... ^^
Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21}
It seems pretty complete to me. <(' , ' <)(^' , ' ^)(> ' , ' )>
Awesome work, Larua! It's great that you use your environment as subject matter and give it a purpose. I like this poem alot. I'm looking forward to more like this one.
