Thread: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21}

Originally Posted by Lasura

Yesterday I was at the dam.
I sat on its walls and watched the water flow by
I hit my hands at its feet and screamed out my fear
…I laid my head on its old shoulders and cried away my pain …

Yesterday I sat at the feet of the old apple tree in my garden.
I leaned my back at its trunk and watched the sun set,
I played with the butterflies and forgot my sadness,
I soaked my feet in the grass and mother earth comforted me…

Yesterday I walked the streets of my hometown
I put on my shoes to guard my feet from the flinders of the past,
I met my ex and smiled at last at what he had done,
I saw a couple swinging- holding hands and thought: “That is forever…”

Yesterday I entered my home and knew we’ll be ok.

GREAT LASURA!!!!!! REALLY AMAZING!!!!! It's so sad in a way but happy as well so I hope to see more! Two thumbs up for yah!

Thank You Kuwi!! ^^ I'm happy to hear you like it!!! And you even say it's great!!! Yay!!!! ^^ I thought it seems uncompleted, but couldn't figure out how to make it more... complete... ^^

Originally Posted by Lasura

Thank You Kuwi!! ^^ I'm happy to hear you like it!!! And you even say it's great!!! Yay!!!! ^^ I thought it seems uncompleted, but couldn't figure out how to make it more... complete... ^^

It seems pretty complete to me. ^_^

Awesome work, Larua! It's great that you use your environment as subject matter and give it a purpose. I like this poem alot. I'm looking forward to more like this one.

Originally Posted by Lasura

Thank You Kuwi!! ^^ I'm happy to hear you like it!!! And you even say it's great!!! Yay!!!! ^^ I thought it seems uncompleted, but couldn't figure out how to make it more... complete... ^^

Well it was still great os no problem on that! It was still amazing! So YEAH LASURA!!!!!!! (Claps)

^^ Thank You again Kuwi *bows*

And thank You Sprout... well... this is not as good as just writting about a shirt, it took the whole day of walking around to write this one... ^^ I'm glad you like it!!!!

Hmm.. @.@ nice...happy to know that u have ur ways on releasing ur stress..
and anger and stuff... ^^ sheesh...all i got is my little "sanctuary" *laughs*

Good job ~! I wanna see more of ur work~! ^^

Lovely poem there, Lasura. The way you ended it felt as if you've woken up with a different view of the world, .. what a meaningful walk indeed Very positive vibe, nice descriptions. Great job