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Jun 21, 2007, 01:05 AM
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 | Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21} Yesterday I was at the dam. I sat on its walls and watched the water flow by I hit my hands at its feet and screamed out my fear …I laid my head on its old shoulders and cried away my pain … Yesterday I sat at the feet of the old apple tree in my garden. I leaned my back at its trunk and watched the sun set, I played with the butterflies and forgot my sadness, I soaked my feet in the grass and mother earth comforted me… Yesterday I walked the streets of my hometown I put on my shoes to guard my feet from the flinders of the past, I met my ex and smiled at last at what he had done, I saw a couple swinging- holding hands and thought: “That is forever…” Yesterday I entered my home and knew we’ll be ok. |
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Jun 21, 2007, 10:20 AM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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| Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21} Quote:
GREAT LASURA!!!!!! REALLY AMAZING!!!!! It's so sad in a way but happy as well so I hope to see more! Two thumbs up for yah!  
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Jun 21, 2007, 10:23 AM
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| Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21} Thank You Kuwi!! ^^ I'm happy to hear you like it!!! And you even say it's great!!! Yay!!!! ^^ I thought it seems uncompleted, but couldn't figure out how to make it more... complete... ^^ |
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Jun 21, 2007, 10:44 AM
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|  Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21} Quote:
Awesome work, Larua! It's great that you use your environment as subject matter and give it a purpose. I like this poem alot. I'm looking forward to more like this one.
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Jun 21, 2007, 10:46 AM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Jun 21, 2007, 10:50 AM
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| Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21} ^^ Thank You again Kuwi *bows* And thank You Sprout... well... this is not as good as just writting about a shirt, it took the whole day of walking around to write this one... ^^ I'm glad you like it!!!! |
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Jun 23, 2007, 09:09 AM
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| Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21} Hmm.. @.@ nice...happy to know that u have ur ways on releasing ur stress.. and anger and stuff... ^^ sheesh...all i got is my little "sanctuary" *laughs* Good job ~! I wanna see more of ur work~! ^^ |
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Jun 23, 2007, 08:59 PM
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| Re: Yesterday I went for a walk... {06/21} Lovely poem there, Lasura. The way you ended it felt as if you've woken up with a different view of the world, .. what a meaningful walk indeed  Very positive vibe, nice descriptions. Great job 
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