Yesterday I was at the dam.
I sat on its walls and watched the water flow by
I hit my hands at its feet and screamed out my fear
…I laid my head on its old shoulders and cried away my pain …
Yesterday I sat at the feet of the old apple tree in my garden.
I leaned my back at its trunk and watched the sun set,
I played with the butterflies and forgot my sadness,
I soaked my feet in the grass and mother earth comforted me…
Yesterday I walked the streets of my hometown
I put on my shoes to guard my feet from the flinders of the past,
I met my ex and smiled at last at what he had done,
I saw a couple swinging- holding hands and thought: “That is forever…”
Yesterday I entered my home and knew we’ll be ok.
Thank You Kuwi!! ^^ I'm happy to hear you like it!!! And you even say it's great!!! Yay!!!! ^^ I thought it seems uncompleted, but couldn't figure out how to make it more... complete... ^^
^^ Thank You again Kuwi *bows*
And thank You Sprout... well... this is not as good as just writting about a shirt, it took the whole day of walking around to write this one... ^^ I'm glad you like it!!!!
Hmm.. @.@ nice...happy to know that u have ur ways on releasing ur stress..
and anger and stuff... ^^ sheesh...all i got is my little "sanctuary" *laughs*
Good job ~! I wanna see more of ur work~! ^^
Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
I'm BACK AO!
Lovely poem there, Lasura. The way you ended it felt as if you've woken up with a different view of the world, .. what a meaningful walk indeed Very positive vibe, nice descriptions. Great job