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    You... {04/24}

    I put my trust in you,
    And again I am deceived.
    I put my hopes in you,
    And again it’s all that’s left.

    You’re in my dreams it’s true,
    But always with a mask of death
    You’re still in my heart it’s true…
    Just hurting me more and more

    Oh, will I ever forget you?
    And all that you brought to me?
    Will I ever forgive you?
    For doing this all to me?

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: You... {04/24}

    Short but I like it, including the middle version lol, looking forward to read more ^_^.
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    Angelic Lasura may be famous one day Lasura's Avatar
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    Re: You... {04/24}

    Thank you Dark wolf!!! Yeah... it's really short... but I just have nothing more to say to that person...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: You... {04/24}

    It's been a while that I seen a poem but.....I still love poems so your poem rules!
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    Re: You... {04/24}

    Nice poem about breaking-up cause sometimes they can go like that and I've had a couple that did.
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    Re: You... {04/24}

    Nice poem Lasura. Short and nice poem. You should do more poem.

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    Re: You... {04/24}

    Thank you Lee!!! I'm trying to writte more and good poems, I'm glad people like them, though it's just what I feel in few simple words...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: You... {04/24}

    Nice,
    Short Decent And nice ! ^^,
    I agree with lee i think you should do some more poems,
    And ill listern in ;D


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