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Old Apr 24, 2007, 11:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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You... {04/24}

I put my trust in you,
And again I am deceived.
I put my hopes in you,
And again it’s all that’s left.

You’re in my dreams it’s true,
But always with a mask of death
You’re still in my heart it’s true…
Just hurting me more and more

Oh, will I ever forget you?
And all that you brought to me?
Will I ever forgive you?
For doing this all to me?
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Old Apr 24, 2007, 11:33 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: You... {04/24}

Short but I like it, including the middle version lol, looking forward to read more ^_^.
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Old Apr 24, 2007, 11:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you Dark wolf!!! Yeah... it's really short... but I just have nothing more to say to that person...
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Old Apr 24, 2007, 12:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: You... {04/24}

It's been a while that I seen a poem but.....I still love poems so your poem rules!
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Old Apr 28, 2007, 04:14 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Nice poem about breaking-up cause sometimes they can go like that and I've had a couple that did.
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Old Apr 30, 2007, 06:06 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice poem Lasura. Short and nice poem. You should do more poem.
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Old Apr 30, 2007, 06:09 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thank you Lee!!! I'm trying to writte more and good poems, I'm glad people like them, though it's just what I feel in few simple words...
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Old Jun 08, 2007, 01:43 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: You... {04/24}

Nice,
Short Decent And nice ! ^^,
I agree with lee i think you should do some more poems,
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