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    Advisories

    Neh, the last critique thread died so I guess I should make a new one.

    What do you guys think about these?









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    Re: Advisories

    Pyro to the rescue!

    The second one is good.
    The stock needs to be in there though, looks like it was just on there
    The first one, loose the border. It's killing me xD;;
    Work on the text a bit also
    But they are good =]

    Here is some of my work waiting to be critiqued


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    Re: Advisories

    I really like what you've been putting out lately, it's very shiny.

    The first one is great, it doesn't need anything in my opinion.

    The second one seems a little empty to me. But other than that, it's lovely.

    Nice job.
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